write not a series of paragraphs, but a series of headlines..
paragraphs are brains smashing against windows..
gotta give em the punch..
write not a series of paragraphs, but a series of headlines..
paragraphs are brains smashing against windows..
gotta give em the punch..
contrast between the claim and mechanism
make a strong claim thats easily obtained
claim doesnt sound possible
vacuum dust from drawers without removing their contents
claim doesnt sound so intense
nice but not overwhelming
an implied mechanism you would like to see..
the twist – use mechamism to overcome claim density
claims all begin to sound the same
a way of doing/acheiving that is so strange the person will believe it all over again enough to try it..
your focused mind can only hold 7 images (words) at a time
the brain connects when it plays
escape the focused conscious mind to create/connect
multiple projects at one time feed each other
the creative triangle – james gardener? – psychologist
wall street – geckco
we have shameful desires..
you dont sells books, magazines or newsletters.. you sell bundles of do’s..
functions..
imply a mechanism for a medium size claim.. more believable than a big claim.. to something that simply cant be done..
words should be invisible
copy should never call attention to itself
the visual visceral image
go to heaven and escape hell
great deal of contrast
be melodramatic
full of proof